22A – Elevator Pitch No. 3
here is my elevator pitch:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sBehwjvFg2I
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sBehwjvFg2I
2) A reflection on the feedback you received
from your last pitch.
I
didn’t receive any feedback on my previous pitch.
3) What did you change, based on the
feedback?
Although there was
no feedback I tried improving my speech by stating more facts relating to solar
energy and one of the company goals to produce and manufacture the solar panels.
Hey there Roy, I think you used what you said in your "3" and rolled into your video nicely. I felt you spoke clearly and once again your passion for the idea came through. I liked how you directly into the camera and not the computer screen, something I did, which to me shows your confidence for the idea and the pitch. Nice job.
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